Feedback from Rough Cut

Upon showing our rough cut, we were given some feedback on how our music video could be improved. This is what it consisted of.

- A few of the shots were badly framed. But with the effects, we were able to make it less noticeable.

- A few of the effects were too over the top, such as the one we used on the bassist. We had to remove this as it did not fit in with the rest of the video.

- They liked the CCTV / blurred TV effects and that we should have it recurring more than just the one time we used it. Upon re-editing the video, we put the effect in at the start and another time during the guitar solo.

- We had to synch up some more of the vocals at the start of the video. With the effects, they were unable to see if we had synched it up properly. They suggested that we should do it more at the start.

- We also had to use the footage of the guitar during the guitar solo and not of the bassist. In our new edited version, we included the guitar.

Upon our feedback, we made all the necessary changes to improve our music video.